Almosts, Carried Ons, and Betweenlines
A ruthless, clinical, and completely unnecessary elimination bracket for the term formerly known as "texts".
Round One: Raw Materials#
All contenders enter the arena. No one is safe.
Soft & Intimate Division#
Notes
Little pings
Paperless letters
Sparks
Pulses
Signals
You-ish & Playful Division#
Wingdings
Mini-missives
Digital post-its
Ramblets
Chatcrumbs
Nonsensicals
Pingments
Symbolic & Trying-Too-Hard Division#
Almosts
Carried-ons
Betweenlines
Messagelets
Word blinks
Syntax droppings
Emotional push notifications
Half-sent haikus
Dings of Destiny™
Disqualified Immediately (You know what you did)#
WhatsApps
Txticals
Zaplets
Data confetti
Scroll droplets
Wordgunk
LOLgorithms
Round Two: Semantic Hunger Games#
Based on vibe accuracy, usability in a sentence, and whether or not it feels like it could be stitched into the hem of a hoodie.
Survivors (Advancing)#
Notes - Classic. Kept on parole.
Little pings - Adorable. Allowed.
Sparks - Charged. Keep.
Signals - Poetic enough. Advance.
Wingdings - Chaos. Promoted.
Digital post-its - Disorganized in a loving way. Advance.
Ramblets - You knew this was staying.
Chatcrumbs - Crumbs of joy. Advancing.
Pingments - Irritating and beautiful. Green-lit.
Almosts - Emotionally devastating. Promoted.
Carried-ons - A callback and a metaphor. Secured.
Betweenlines - On-the-nose in the best way. Advancing.
Half-sent haikus - Specific and evocative. Just barely.
Eliminated With Honor#
Paperless letters — Like a 2004 Kindle prototype.
Pulses — Hospital monitor energy.
Mini-missives — Sounds like that disappointing newsletter my uncle forwards monthly.
Nonsensicals — Too try-hard.
Word blinks, syntax droppings, data confetti, etc. — Crimes, all of them.
Dings of Destiny™ — Legally inadvisable.
Round Three: The Finalists#
Only the truest conveyances remain. This is about tone, usage, and the kind of layered meaning that would make a literature professor nod slowly.
Finalists:
Notes
Little pings
Sparks
Signals
Wingdings
Digital post-its
Ramblets
Chatcrumbs
Pingments
Almosts
Carried-ons
Betweenlines
Half-sent haikus
Evaluation Criteria#
Can it be said aloud in a sentence?
Would she roll her eyes lovingly?
Does it sound like something you would invent, abandon, then immediately resurrect mid-rant?
🏆 Final Form: Crowned Champion#
Almosts, Carried-ons, and Betweenlines#
Like law firm partners.
Like three ghosts in a trench coat.
Like three ways to say: “you mattered today.”
"I sent you three almosts, one carried-on, and two betweenlines. Check your phone."
Per-fect.
Conclusion (as if you didn’t already know)#
The committee rests. The decision is final. (Unless we’re feeling whimsical tomorrow.)
The final verdict is: "Messages" (this was relayed to me by Mari, so it’s final)
No punchline, no twist ending.
Just a simple, elegant solution to a problem that— let’s be honest— never existed.
